2025年上海中考英语作文真题解析
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2025-06-18 22:09:09
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一、作文真题(回忆版)

假如你是李华,现在有三个英语项目化小组正在招新。请选择一组,写一封申请信。信中需要说明你的优势和选择理由,并提出建议。三个小组的主题分别是:

A. 健康食物能否带来健康;

B. 音乐能否帮助学习;

C. Happy ending的书籍是否更受欢迎。

二、解题技巧

(一)仔细审题

1. 确定体裁

题目要求写申请信,需以“李华”的身份撰写,使用正式且礼貌的书信格式,包含称呼、正文、结束语和署名。

2. 分析题材

1)选择小组

从三个主题中明确选定一组,不能含糊或多选,开头即点明意向小组。

2)阐述优势

围绕选定主题,结合自身经历、技能、知识储备等,展现与主题研究相匹配的能力。

3)说明理由:解释选择该主题的原因,体现对主题的兴趣和见解。

4)提出建议:针对所选主题小组未来的活动或研究,给出具体、可行的方案 。

(二)谋篇布局

1. 开头

开门见山表明写信目的,如 “I am writing to apply for Group [X]”,并简要提及对主题的兴趣,如 “I am deeply interested in the topic of whether [topic content]”。

2. 主体

1)阐述自身优势

若选A组“健康食物能否带来健康”,可突出自身在营养知识学习、健康饮食实践、相关调查研究等方面的经验。

若选B组“音乐能否帮助学习”,可强调音乐特长、对音乐影响的观察等。

若选C组“Happy ending的书籍是否更受欢迎”,可说明阅读量、书评写作能力等。

2)举例说明

通过具体事例佐证优势,避免空泛表述,如 “I once conducted a survey on students' reading preferences for my school project”。

3)说明选择理由

从个人兴趣、生活体验、社会意义等角度出发,如选择C组可写 “I have always been curious about how the ending of a book can affect readers' emotions and reading choices”。

4)提出建议

建议需围绕小组研究方向设计,如A组可组织校园健康饮食宣传活动,B组开展音乐辅助学习的实验,C组举办书籍结局主题讨论活动。同时,要明确活动形式、参与对象、预期效果等,如 “We can invite local nutritionists to give lectures during the 'Healthy Food Week'”。

3. 结尾

表达期待加入的愿望,如 “I am looking forward to the opportunity to contribute to Group [X] and explore this topic further”。

三、措辞造句

1. 用词丰富

避免重复使用同一词汇,如表达“喜欢”,可交替使用“be interested in”“be fascinated by”“be fond of”等。

2. 句式多变

除简单句和并列句外,更要合理运用复合句、非谓语结构等,如 “Having read a large number of books, I have noticed that the endings often leave a deep impression on me”。

3. 衔接连贯

使用 “firstly, secondly, besides, furthermore, in addition” 等连接词,增强文章的句际和段际的前后衔接与连贯。

(四)检查修改

完成写作后,应仔细检查语法错误(时态、单复数、主谓一致等)、拼写错误、标点使用,同时确保书信格式完整规范,内容满足题目各项要求,字数符合考试标准 。

三、参考范文

(一)A组

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua, and I am writing to apply for Group A, which focuses on whether healthy food can bring good health.

I'm extremely drawn to this topic as I have a profound interest in health and nutrition. In my daily life, I always pay close attention to my diet, carefully selecting various healthy foods. I've also read numerous books and articles about healthy eating, equipping myself with a solid foundation of knowledge in this area.

One of my strengths is my strong research ability. I'm proficient in gathering information from reliable sources and analyzing data effectively. For example, I once conducted a small - scale research on the nutritional value of different grains for a school project. Additionally, I'm a good communicator, which allows me to express my ideas clearly and listen to others' opinions with an open mind.

My suggestion for our group is to organize a "Healthy Food Week" at school. During this week, we can set up booths to introduce the benefits of healthy foods, distribute brochures with healthy recipes, and even hold cooking demonstrations to show students how to make simple and healthy meals.

I'm looking forward to the opportunity to contribute to Group A and explore this important topic further.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

(二)B组

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua, and I'm eager to join Group B to explore whether music can aid learning.

Music has always been an essential part of my life. Whenever I'm buried in piles of homework, listening to music can instantly lift my spirits and help me relax.

I have several advantages that I believe will be beneficial to the group. First, I'm an active participant in the school's music club, where I've learned to play the guitar. This experience has given me a deep understanding of different musical elements and genres. Second, I'm good at conducting surveys and interviews. I once surveyed my classmates about their music - listening habits and academic performance, which provided some interesting insights.

To better study this topic, I suggest we carry out a series of experiments. For instance, we can divide students into different groups, have one group study with background music and another without, and then compare their learning efficiency through tests and questionnaires.

I'm excited about the chance to work with you in Group B and uncover the relationship between music and learning.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

(三)C组

Dear Sir/Madam,

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